I did something a few days ago that I don’t usually do, which is re-write a verse. I put it up on my twitter, but anyone who visits the site wouldn’t have known that. I’m working on the new site, and I hope to integrate twitter posts directly in the story feed, but that’s not here, but probably there, where “there” is “sometime in the future”.

I rewrote the last verse in This Is Total Take Your Soul Music, mainly because I found what I’d written previously to be lacking, both in quality of the lyrics themselves, as well as lacking in creativity. Uninspired, really. It had a bunch of points that didn’t really flow from one concept to the next – everything was just kind of… there. I knew that I really liked the first four lines of the verse, so I kept those and built from there. It turned out really nice. Hype came by to record some scratch vocals tonight for Soul Music, and he was feeling the newly improved verse. We also had to re-record Faithfree because of some messed up things happening with Garageband. We’re using Garageband at the moment, until I can get my laptop back from my folks. I think we’ll survive though. It’s all good.